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Waiting For You

January 5, 2010
By Chelz PLATINUM, Iron Mountain, Michigan
Chelz PLATINUM, Iron Mountain, Michigan
23 articles 3 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When life gives you lemons, bite into it and embrace the bitter taste of reality." (My own words)


Hey you, its me
Knocking at your door.

Knocking in silence
As it’s about to pour.

Standing her alone,
Waiting for you to see.

All I wanted baby
Was you and me.

Thinking nervously
Maybe your not home.

Please don’t leave me,
I don’t want to be alone.


The author's comments:
My boyfriend and I were going through a tough time. I didn't want to lose him.

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Chelz PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 1 2010 at 1:55 pm
Chelz PLATINUM, Iron Mountain, Michigan
23 articles 3 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When life gives you lemons, bite into it and embrace the bitter taste of reality." (My own words)

I'm glad and thank you

on Jan. 22 2010 at 7:50 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

I really liked this poem i can really relate to it. keep on writing and good luck

Chelz PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 22 2010 at 9:03 am
Chelz PLATINUM, Iron Mountain, Michigan
23 articles 3 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When life gives you lemons, bite into it and embrace the bitter taste of reality." (My own words)

Thank you, and I will

on Jan. 20 2010 at 12:15 pm
his_country_girl SILVER, Goshen, Indiana
8 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Reality is almost always wrong."-House

"Don't worry when you feel something, worry when you don't."- SVU

oh my goodness! this poem is amazing! i love it! =) keep it up, cuz i really enjoy it. =)) i hope things worked out okay!