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November 5, 2009
By jdrch BRONZE, Baltimore, Maryland
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&quot;I believe that our Heavenly Father invented man because he was dissapointed in the monkey.&quot; <br /> Mark Twain

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When she moves the earth quakes with fear
When she talks her voice is so pure
When she sees me I disappear
‘cause of those eyes that me, they lure
I want to whisper in her ear
That I love her with all my soul
But I can’t so I drop to tears
She needs to know she makes me whole
I see her face and start to cry
Her stunning smile is the reason
For her love I would gladly die
For her love I’ll wait all season
But in the end she’ll come to me
‘cause to her house, I stole the key

The author's comments:
my love inspired me to write this poem. i don't have the courage to tell my love that i love her so i wait until she comes to me. i think many teens have this problem and this poem can relate to them.
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WeAllBurn PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 25 2011 at 2:02 pm
WeAllBurn PLATINUM, Vermilion, Ohio
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&quot;The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong.&quot; ~Mahatma Gandhi

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i have been there <3 ahh amazing 5/5 (:
Milo! said...
on Mar. 14 2010 at 7:23 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.