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The love see-saw

December 30, 2014
By Anonymous

Frustration, irritation.
Pure and unadulterated vexation.
Laughter in my eyes,
Anger in my bones.
Still gasping for that breathable air.
Still beating for that controlled rhythm.
Because it’s either soulful hymns
Or you continuously banging on my door

Desperation, exasperation.
Anger and an interminable impatience.
Either you love me too much,
Or you don’t love me at all.
Still looking for that safe haven in between.
Still looking for that moderate shade.
Because you either paint in red
Or in the darkest of all grays.

Aching, hurting.
Agony and an intolerable stinging.
Teddy bear on by bed.
Blood on my walls.
Still searching for that balance of mind.
Still waiting for this pall to lift.
Because you either give me lavish gifts,
Or slits on my wrists.


The author's comments:

 I dont supprot such relations, but  i have seen my friend go through all this. When she see this I hope she'll understand what i mean.


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on Jan. 11 2015 at 6:27 pm
jessenia_16 BRONZE, Moreno Valley, California
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Favorite Quote:
"be the change you wish to see in the world"

Your really good!

on Jan. 9 2015 at 5:40 pm
Writer13 BRONZE, Washington, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"May your mouth sing and your soul soar, but if your heart breaks that's all the more whole-hearted the words will make you, and you will soon unlock the summit of understanding." ~quote by me

Of course!;) It depicts true frustration and sadness and it has the perfect rhythm! Great job! I can't wait for more work of yours coming up!

on Jan. 9 2015 at 3:17 am
shelly1497 BRONZE, Sagar, Other
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@shef17 thanks a lot .... Your appreciation is my biggest inspiration sis.....!!

shef17 said...
on Jan. 9 2015 at 3:08 am
shef17, Sagar, Other
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awesome.. as always..loved it.. :)

on Jan. 9 2015 at 1:00 am
shelly1497 BRONZE, Sagar, Other
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Thanks! Glad to know someone found it beautiful....

on Jan. 9 2015 at 12:58 am
shelly1497 BRONZE, Sagar, Other
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Thank you so much!

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on Jan. 8 2015 at 8:42 pm
NoniDoni GOLD, Calabasas, California
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beautifully written! i sang it to myself like a rap and like a song

on Jan. 8 2015 at 7:36 pm
Writer13 BRONZE, Washington, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"May your mouth sing and your soul soar, but if your heart breaks that's all the more whole-hearted the words will make you, and you will soon unlock the summit of understanding." ~quote by me

So rhythmic and beautiful! I loved it!