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Hold On My Dear

January 30, 2014
By nakubara PLATINUM, Belvidere, New Jersey
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nakubara PLATINUM, Belvidere, New Jersey
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Everything you do in life is insignificant, but its important you do it anyway ~Ghandi

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My dear, I feel you slipping so grab my hand and never let go
Grab me and hold me close and we'll slip together
We have been in this from the start
We'll be in this forever
Hold onto my hand and I'll hold onto your heart
I don't want to loose you like this
I don't want to loose you at all
So let us plunge into sweet serenity and bliss
My dear, I feel you slipping so grab my hand cause I'll never let you fall

© Dominique D., Ozone Park, NY

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Shadow_Wolf GOLD said...
on Mar. 4 2014 at 2:22 pm
Shadow_Wolf GOLD, Mayfield Heigts, Ohio
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&quot;Love is not opening your eyes but opening your heart.&quot;<br /> &quot;You see not with your eyes, But with your heart.&quot;<br /> &quot;Think first with your heart not your head.&quot;<br /> &quot;If it has a heart, It is human.&quot;

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Nice poem... Love the image that goes with it. If I may, I would suggest choosing better diction and expanding the poem a bit.... other than that Well done
.king. SILVER said...
on Feb. 15 2014 at 2:15 pm
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Wow, this is lovely! I like the feelings here, very sweet! ^.^ Good job!
Lucifer666 said...
on Feb. 9 2014 at 11:58 am
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Nicely penned m8, I liked this alot great job :>