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October 6, 2013
By Claire_Eliza26 GOLD, Traverse City, Michigan
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Claire_Eliza26 GOLD, Traverse City, Michigan
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They tell us, "destroy what destroys you" and then they get mad when we hurt ourselves

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Pure as a blank page
draw upon my skin unmarked
envelop me with raw ideas
my body your greatest work of art

Sketch me your wildest desires
secrets spilled from hushed tones
paint me with your fingertips
etch them into my bones

design me a masterpiece
let your fingers be the guide
bathe me in your thoughts
let them wash over me like the tide

I wish to be your canvas
make of me your grandest display
let your words define me
perfection here I lay

© James H., Philadelphia, PA

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asofnow GOLD said...
on Dec. 20 2013 at 4:55 pm
asofnow GOLD, Troy, Michigan
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Nothing gold can stay ~ Robert Frost

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This was very nice. I liked the format of it. Great job.
elycavill SILVER said...
on Nov. 29 2013 at 4:00 pm
elycavill SILVER, Samobor, Other
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Leave nothing but footprints,<br /> Take nothing but pictures,<br /> Kill nothing but time.

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I like this poem very much, also your vocabulary :D
VelanedeBeaute GOLD said...
on Nov. 25 2013 at 4:19 am
VelanedeBeaute GOLD, Sialkot, Other
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I vow to shine, like a sapphire, some gem!<br /> I promise, not to whine, but smile till the end.<br /> The symphony of my life<br /> like a violin I will play, <br /> I would vouch, <br /> Vehement to my life I lay.

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This was admirable. Keep up! :D 
Claire_Eliza26 GOLD said...
on Nov. 23 2013 at 6:29 pm
Claire_Eliza26 GOLD, Traverse City, Michigan
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They tell us, &quot;destroy what destroys you&quot; and then they get mad when we hurt ourselves

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Thank You! Love the fedback 
Claire_Eliza26 GOLD said...
on Nov. 20 2013 at 9:18 pm
Claire_Eliza26 GOLD, Traverse City, Michigan
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Clarkboy73, thank you so much! I am just starting but I will try and write more. I wan't going for a specific angle, I guess it can be interpretted two ways
Clarkboy73 said...
on Oct. 7 2013 at 8:04 pm
Never read any of your stuff before..would really like to hear more! Question..is this peom trying to describe a sexual relationship between characters of a purley emotional one?
Jane_Ank said...
on Oct. 7 2013 at 8:02 pm
So beautiful, love the word choice and flow. Seriously great stuff!