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Lonely Dancing

March 14, 2013
By Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou


She begged me to dance with her,
but I always rejected
Her request; now that dancer
Dances with my neglected;

She’s off with him—together
—and she leaves me forever.


The author's comments:
I was inspired by Bruno Mars's song "When I Was Your Man" and by "Dirty Dancing".

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on Feb. 22 2015 at 9:47 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
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Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

Oh, the emotion ;-; *hides in corner and cries quietly*

Mckay ELITE said...
on Aug. 27 2013 at 3:19 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

If you say so... XD Thanks so much for the comment and encouragement. 

on Aug. 27 2013 at 8:18 am
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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I love this poem! You captured my intrest with the title, keep writing Mckay! 

Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 22 2013 at 3:48 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

Thank you. And heck yeah I'll read your work. Holla at me any time you want me to read anything you posted. And I love your feedback too. And you too keep rockin!

on Apr. 20 2013 at 5:56 pm
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light&quot; --Dylan Thomas

Great poem!!! I love ur taste in music! Bruno mars is great and I can totally see the reference. Great job. I have a couple of new pieces up and would love if you could take a look at them. I love your feedback and would really appreciate some if u have time! Great Job! Keep rockin

Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 5 2013 at 12:33 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

I will check it out ASAP!. 

on Apr. 4 2013 at 6:13 pm
LexusMarie PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
27 articles 0 photos 423 comments

Favorite Quote:
The more control you have over yourself, the less control others have over you.

I don't know if you saw, but one of my newest poems is up called I'm Conscience-Stricken! You're so welcome! I am obviously going to continue to read your work! Thansk so much! c:

Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 4 2013 at 2:37 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

First, thank you for loving my taste in movies. I'm a huse movie buff. Your taste is great as well. I love every movie you chose. Second, thank you for liking this poem. And thank you a million times for thinking I'm a "spectacular writer"—God's ear to your lips—that means so so much to me. You too are a spectacular writer. I can't wait to read your future work. 

on Apr. 3 2013 at 7:26 pm
LexusMarie PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
27 articles 0 photos 423 comments

Favorite Quote:
The more control you have over yourself, the less control others have over you.

Your movie taste is impeccable. c: I really, really enjoyed reading this. I like how the poem/song is simple but the meaning is so much greater. I tell you this on all the things I comment on of yours, but again, you're a spectacular writer! The picture goes well with it. The title is great. The whole thing is amazing.