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The Tears Of the Souls in the Sky

March 24, 2012
By Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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They wait and watch,
they don't hesitate. . .

And as it starts to pour. . .
You kiss me more. . .

But then you turn around and walk away. . . Then you leave me in
the cold and pouring rain!

The tears of the souls in the sky!
Are meant for you! And only you!
Theses tear of mine! Are meant for you! And only you! And only you!

When you walk to her. . .
When you whisper in her ear
It tells me. . all that I need to know. . .

These rain drops, falling from the sky, are meant for you. . .
And only you!

These tears of mine! are meant for you! And only. . . you. . .

© Courtney K., Bethel Park, PA

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GreekGoddess BRONZE said...
on Jun. 8 2013 at 11:44 am
GreekGoddess BRONZE, Andover, Connecticut
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"The unprepared rebel dies in the fire."<br /> ~unknown

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This is really quite good, a wonderful idea, and peice. As said before, you need more structure, but it's really good as it stands now :)
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 2 2012 at 6:30 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Awww, thank you so much! :D and of course when I have time too! :P

 

~Free :)(:

albinotiger GOLD said...
on Jul. 27 2012 at 7:01 pm
albinotiger GOLD, Gloucester, Massachusetts
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&quot;Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win&quot;- Stephen King<br /> &ldquo;In life, unlike chess, the game continues after checkmate&rdquo;- Isaac Asimov

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AWW thats so sweet and special!! (maybe check out my work sometime)
__horizon133 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 21 2012 at 9:04 pm
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
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welcome! you might like my poem 'After Treatment,' too. :)
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 21 2012 at 5:42 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Thank you so much! I really appricate it! 

 

~Free :)(:

__horizon133 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 20 2012 at 11:49 pm
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
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you have a lot of raw emotion to work with--that is very good! As SirYouAreAsleep said, try and give more structure to it. Keep writing!
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 3 2012 at 4:09 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Thanks for commenting, and I haven't really found the rythm yet. :)(:
SirAreYouAsleep GOLD said...
on May. 31 2012 at 9:24 am
SirAreYouAsleep GOLD, Milton, New Hampshire
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What style is this supposed to be? And what's the rhythm like ? I do like the lyrics, and I would say just watch the Rhythm, but I don't know what to correct in it.