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These Tears Are Shed For You
August 9, 2011
I sit there crying,
On the porch step,
as you walk away from me.
These tears of mine
shed for you and only you.
they shed for you, oh oo oo oo.
and as they start to clear,
you whisper, in her ear.
These tears of mine
shed for and only you.
these tears of mine, oo oo oo.
You walk away,
hand and hand.
And say
never to come back again!
These tear shed for you,
and only you.
These tears of mine
are shed for and only you
oo oo.
Shed for you
and only you
Shed for you
and only
you. . .
oo oo oo. . .
© Andrea E., Phoenix, AZ
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Musicalartist said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 8:02 am
i really like your writing!
~Max <3
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on Dec. 13 2011 at 8:01 am
i really liek your work, just as you like mine!
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Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 20 2011 at 4:28 pm
thank you sooo much! u made my day! :)(:
thetruthawaits94 SILVER said...
on Aug. 17 2011 at 4:49 pm
very cool. i like it a lot! i think if you could add some verses describing him, what the two of you were, who the other girl is, or something like that just to tell more of a story so that i would feel more connected to or have more feelings for the subject, you know? i think it would be more powerful that way. right now i feel like this is the refrain but not much else because it just repeats over and over. BUT this is really a great thought to build on and i encourage you to keep doing so! This is really good so far! :)
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 17 2011 at 4:08 pm
Thank you sooo much!!!! :)(:
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on Aug. 17 2011 at 4:05 pm
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Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 17 2011 at 3:23 pm
please comment and rate. I enjoy readig and listening to it! Thanks a bunch! :)(:
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