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Rain Rain Go Away

July 18, 2011
By Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Rain Rain go away, come back another day!
Rain Rain Your such fool to oo! flood my pool!
Rain rain go away, come back another day!
Rain Rain dripping and dropping you drive me crazy never stopping!
Rain Rain go away, come back another day!
Rain Rain your so insane! Go do this another day!
Rain Rain Go away come back another day!!!
Yeah! Yeah! Yeah! Yeahaaa!!!


The author's comments:
This was inspired from the storm that happened today. The rain drove me insane! But it inspired me to add onto the original kids song of rain rain go away come back another day. I hope you find it interesting and good.

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on Aug. 17 2011 at 3:59 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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actually now it is: jellotinisjiggly24

on Aug. 15 2011 at 6:55 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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oh and my new user name is now: Malrox21213 instead of: writerfreak21231.

on Jul. 23 2011 at 8:42 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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I just posted a new peom called Miss Perfect: The poem, not the book. Please check it out if u can! Thanks! and keep writing everyone! :)(:

on Jul. 22 2011 at 7:37 am
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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If any of u could check out my new story called THE BEAST that would be great! Make sure u post comments on if u liked it or not! :)(: thanks a bunch!

on Jul. 22 2011 at 6:46 am
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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thanks for the postive comment and thanks for reading! :)(:

on Jul. 21 2011 at 9:59 pm
nikkigonefishin GOLD, Los Angeles, California
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Favorite Quote:
" A smile is worth a thousand words"
" The purpose of the writer is to keep civilization from destroying itself."- Albert Camus

This is adorable and creative!! I liked how you took the nursery rhyme and made your own version:)

on Jul. 21 2011 at 8:43 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Thanks! I tried to make the classic into something fun! :)(:

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on Jul. 21 2011 at 8:08 pm
HaleyStar GOLD, Mattoon, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"The dog? You are named after a dog?"
"I had a lot of fond memories of that Dog."~Indiana Jones~

"Can you knot?"
"I cannot."
"You can knot?"
"I cannot knot." ~Winnie the Pooh movie~

Cute, except in my case where i live its heat, heat go away. I'd love to see some rain. :P

 


on Jul. 21 2011 at 2:42 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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I hoped u liked the song! I wrote other things as well. any one check them out if u want. just click my user name and check out my other work! thanks! :)(: