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June 14, 2011
By jessburns1894 SILVER, Islip, New York
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You stand there and you murmur you evil words
You never spoke of her like that before
You think we don’t hear you
You think that we don’t know that it is us that you murmur about
We know what you say we know what you mean
We are not foolish
Foolish like you
Hurtful like you
You should know better
You should know not to murmur those evil things
Since you’re the mature one
You’re suppose to know what’s wrong and what’s right
But clearly you don’t know
Don’t know right from wrong
From cruel and fair
From being mature and in mature
So you stand there go ahead just stand there and you murmur your evil words
I’ll be strong and move on to a better stronger place.
I don’t need you
I’m better than you
So good-bye…

© Amanda F., New City, NY

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sweetdollsarah BRONZE said...
on Jul. 4 2011 at 7:55 pm
sweetdollsarah BRONZE, Hemet, California
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It was okay. I think that some of your lyricks don't feel finished, like you could use stronger words r add more depth to them. It also seems to end dramaticly sometimes and leap into a brand new topic. Good job so far!!
thankfate SILVER said...
on Jul. 3 2011 at 2:35 pm
thankfate SILVER, HELLO WISCONSIN!!!, Wisconsin
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It's pretty good! It kind of drags though. Sometimes it gets really good, and others it gets amateur-ish. Keep writing!