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Ode to Seven

January 18, 2011
By xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE, Godfrey, Illinois
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I want to paint my face a different shade of red
'Cause this magenta color doesn't fit my eyes
I wish I could stop acting like a maniac
'Cause it seems to push people away

Why doesn't anyone love me for who I really am?
I wish somebody would love me like I have always loved them
(I've always loved you)

This here flower is a lovely shade of blue
Do you love it like I love you?

© Asia B., Hudson, MA

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So my friend, Seven, makes music, and I wrote some lyrics to go with one of his songs. So I decided I would post it here...
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xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE said...
on Apr. 6 2011 at 9:13 am
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE, Godfrey, Illinois
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Thanks!

There's actually a video, Seven's music is playing i the background while I sing. It's really very crappy, but if you wanna take a look at it, here's the link;

/watch?v=mmq4_O3kpq0

(Just put you tube dot c om before it)

Dominicano_Loco PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 6 2011 at 8:19 am
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This could be a great song. add the right type of music, add a chorus and another verse or 2 and this'd be a song i'd love to hear. :) great job.
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE said...
on Feb. 25 2011 at 4:39 pm
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE, Godfrey, Illinois
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Thank ya very much!^^

Sometimes when I write songs, which isn't actually too often, I add a random last line about colors...I don't know why I do that, though *shruggie*

Hazel-daisy GOLD said...
on Feb. 25 2011 at 4:20 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
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i really like this and i can definately see this as a really good song with the rigt music. i especially  like the last two lines "this here flower is a lovely shade of blue Do you love it like i love you?" i love it!! great job!!
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE said...
on Feb. 21 2011 at 7:09 pm
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE, Godfrey, Illinois
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Thanks mucho grande, O Daughter of Evil!^^
DaughterofEvil said...
on Feb. 21 2011 at 7:05 pm

Pie, this work is very good. I've never actually written song lyrics before. The message was very clear and lovely. Anyways,

5/5

xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE said...
on Feb. 20 2011 at 7:00 pm
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE, Godfrey, Illinois
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Ah, Chicago is fun. I've only been ther eonce, though, takes like an entire day to drive up there :P
Authorgal98 GOLD said...
on Feb. 19 2011 at 12:15 pm
Authorgal98 GOLD, Frankort, Illinois
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Ooooh haha yeha I live 45 minutes from Chicago
_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Feb. 17 2011 at 6:04 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
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Don't worry, I sound like a dieing pig when I sing. Though unlike the pig I don't make bacon for breakfast the next day.

Btw- do you mind checking out the first chapter of my story called Kingdom Come? I posted it as a novel to, though it hasn't been aproved yet. Luckily the 1st chapter was already posted.

xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE said...
on Feb. 17 2011 at 6:00 pm
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE, Godfrey, Illinois
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Thanks, EvilLaugh, I like to keep my poems kind of short, it seems people don't really wanna read three pages of rhymes :P
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE said...
on Feb. 17 2011 at 6:00 pm
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE, Godfrey, Illinois
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Thanks! ^^

I think he liked it. I kind of did it as a surprise, of course when I sung it to him, it was pretty craptastic. I have a horrible singing voice :P

xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE said...
on Feb. 17 2011 at 5:58 pm
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE, Godfrey, Illinois
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I don't think I have, sorry. I live more in the Southern part of IL, near St. Louis and junk ^^
Authorgal98 GOLD said...
on Feb. 16 2011 at 6:48 pm
Authorgal98 GOLD, Frankort, Illinois
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No problem! And I'm form a small town, Frankfort. It's right by Joliet, New Lennox, Mokena,.. ever heard of those places?
Origami_Ferret SILVER said...
on Feb. 16 2011 at 6:34 pm
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I'm a-liking it. Short but sweet; very nice, yeah?
_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Feb. 16 2011 at 6:26 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
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I like it, it seems differernt from other poems in the same catagory, which is a good thing. Hope Seven liked what you wrote as much as everyone else does.
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE said...
on Feb. 16 2011 at 5:53 pm
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE, Godfrey, Illinois
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Thanks! ^^

What part of Illinois are you from?

Authorgal98 GOLD said...
on Feb. 16 2011 at 5:50 pm
Authorgal98 GOLD, Frankort, Illinois
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Ooh, and your form IL, too!!!! Just got better! hahaha go corn ^.^
Authorgal98 GOLD said...
on Feb. 16 2011 at 5:49 pm
Authorgal98 GOLD, Frankort, Illinois
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Really love it!!! Great job, Seven should be proud!
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE said...
on Feb. 7 2011 at 4:48 pm
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE, Godfrey, Illinois
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Haha, that little smiley cracks me up :D

Thanks for reading :]

xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE said...
on Feb. 7 2011 at 4:47 pm
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE, Godfrey, Illinois
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Thanks so much! :]