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Rain Rain Go Away

April 19, 2010
By ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.
Ralph Waldo Emerson
<3


Your words repeat themselves
Over and over in my mind
Wishin' they were for someone else
But I'm the only Rain in your life

Chorus:
You said
Rain Rain Go Away
Come Again Another Day
You Know I Love You
But You Had YOur Chance To Play
Now It Breaks My Heart To Say
Rain Rain Go Away

You said we could be friends
But we havent talked in a while
I wonder if you miss me yet
Cuz I sure miss your smile

When you see me you nod hello
And tears spring up in my eyes
I wish we could still share hugs
Instead of memories of that painful goodbye

Chorus:

Rain Rain Go Away
Rain Rain Go Away


The author's comments:
If I wrote this for you, you know who you are. I wish the best for you!!!!!! ifly!! <3

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on Oct. 7 2010 at 3:43 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

I'm tellin ya! You're gonna be famous!!! Keep on writin'!!!!!!!!! :D!!!

on Oct. 6 2010 at 9:54 pm
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
29 articles 0 photos 204 comments

Favorite Quote:
That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.
Ralph Waldo Emerson
<3

Thanks! I really appreciate it! You don't know how much that means to me. :)

on Oct. 6 2010 at 7:59 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

This is really beautiful! You're an amazing song/poem writer and you're incredibly talented! :) Im jealous lol keep writing I'm totally gnna read more!

on Jul. 12 2010 at 1:26 pm
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
29 articles 0 photos 204 comments

Favorite Quote:
That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.
Ralph Waldo Emerson
<3

i love you rain! I love all your poems too!!!!! you're so creative!

Rain777 GOLD said...
on Jul. 11 2010 at 2:19 pm
Rain777 GOLD, ?Town, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be yourself, an original is always better than a copy! :D

:)

I love you Ellyn..and also this Poem!

For those of you who dont know...this poem is actually EXTREMELY clever..he used to call me Rain..and yeah..asked me to go away.


on Jul. 6 2010 at 12:36 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1979 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

this is awesome:DD i like ur wordings. i also totally love the second lil verse ^^

on May. 25 2010 at 8:31 pm
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
29 articles 0 photos 204 comments

Favorite Quote:
That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.
Ralph Waldo Emerson
<3

haha thanks sis. um i wrote this for reyna. yeah it'd be cool if you sang my songs. i've got a pretty big pile of 'em here!

on May. 25 2010 at 2:40 pm
Ellyn! im so impressed with this, and all of your work. this song made me cry. i love you and someday when im famous i would love for you to write and possibly record some songs with me! it would be an honor for you to allow me to sing your songs.