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Why Don't You

January 31, 2010
By Randileighlove SILVER, Mertzon, Texas
Randileighlove SILVER, Mertzon, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live In Love


You left me,
I watched you drive away.
It was a Sunday.
I went to church and I prayed.
I hope God can help me, get over this hurt over you.

So why don't you leave me, like you said you were gonna do.
So why don't you leave me, because you said you wanted to.
I meant every word that I said.
And I better not see you driving back.
So why don't you leave me, I don't really wanna see you.
So why don't you leave me, why don't you?

You called me as you were driving down the road.
Saying "Baby I'm sorry, Please let me come back home."
I said "You don't need me" and as I hung up the phone,
I slid down the wall and a tear rolled down my cheek.

So why don't you leave me, like you said you were gonna do.
So why don't you leave me, because you said you wanted to.
I meant every word that I said.
And I better not see you driving back.
So why don't you leave me, I don't really wanna see you.
So why don't you leave me, why don't you?

You left me,
I watched you drive away.
It was a Sunday.
I went to church and I prayed.
I hope God can help me get over this hurt over you.
So why don't you leave me, why don't you?


The author's comments:
I wrote this song thinking of the line from Gloriana's song "If you're Leavin'". it says "If youre leaving, don't look back, leave me like you mean it". It is really about this boyfriend that broke up with me, and then he talks to me the exact same. I just wanted him to leave me alone so I can get over him, and then be friends later.. but this is my song "Why Don't You"

<3 Randi

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on Aug. 7 2011 at 10:06 am
maggie.ramone BRONZE, Bubblegum World, Mississippi
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Shahed GOLD said...
on May. 20 2010 at 4:54 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

You bet! I really like it! <3

on May. 19 2010 at 8:14 pm
Randileighlove SILVER, Mertzon, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live In Love

OMG! thanks for the awesome feedback it really means a lot to me :) Thanks

Shahed GOLD said...
on May. 19 2010 at 7:51 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

I was reading it, then started singing the lines lol , it will make a nice song! -- gr8 song --

 

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