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You're Mine

August 6, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
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distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

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Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!

© John O., New City, NY

The author's comments:
Hi everyone! This is my very fist song that I have ever written!! I hope that you all like this song, and I would Really appreciate it if you could rate and comment, I really want to know how everyone thinks of this! Thanks again!!!
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dia.dreamer GOLD said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 10:34 am
dia.dreamer GOLD, Kochi, Other
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&quot;I saw an angel in the marble and carved until I set him free.&quot; - Michelangelo<br /> &quot;I took a deep breath and listened to the old bray of my heart: I am, I am, I am.&quot; - Sylvia Plath

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Wow this is awesome...I read it out loud and found myself singing a whole new tune just like that!! I can't believe this is really your first song!
Shivam GOLD said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 3:12 am
Shivam GOLD, Lucknow, Other
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Its nothing like nothing or all.. its just that how far you climb up the tree before you fall..

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the song you wrote is very impactful and beautiful, keep trying , keep writing, keep getting better... Best Wishes
Jarbey_unknown GOLD said...
on Jun. 13 2011 at 11:25 pm
Jarbey_unknown GOLD, Laplace, Louisiana
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that was beautiful i loved it so much keep up the good work
Tough_Heart SILVER said...
on Jun. 13 2011 at 12:33 pm
Tough_Heart SILVER, Abc, South Dakota
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This is UBER GOOD!!! best song I've read so far
karash10397 said...
on Jun. 13 2011 at 12:16 pm

This is good ..... 


sportsycrystal GOLD said...
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I really love this... and i really like your name btw i think it really stands out to every dreamer and writer here

 

twpercy BRONZE said...
on May. 22 2011 at 11:41 am
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this is good.
StacieTonissen SILVER said...
on May. 16 2011 at 7:34 pm
StacieTonissen SILVER, Hubbard, Oregon
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Wow this is a really good song...could I possibly use this sometime?
purplelass_3209 BRONZE said...
on May. 4 2011 at 1:02 am
purplelass_3209 BRONZE, Iriga City, Other
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I like your song *´'`°¤¸¸.•'´`'•.¸¸¤°´'`**´'`°¤¸¸.•'´`'•.¸¸¤°´'`**´'`°¤¸¸.•'´`'•.¸¸¤°´'`*
estherhoran__ GOLD said...
on Apr. 30 2011 at 11:24 pm
estherhoran__ GOLD, Bell Gardens, California
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It's very well written! i love it keep up the good work buddy!
Sierra379 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 30 2011 at 3:37 pm
Sierra379 BRONZE, Lehi, Utah
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I love it! ...wow youve got talent
MonaLisa316 GOLD said...
on Apr. 30 2011 at 12:14 pm
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this was so amazin...i really loved it
ehascher BRONZE said...
on Apr. 29 2011 at 10:27 am
ehascher BRONZE, Michigan
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This is really good! I love the first verse, and the beginning of the chorus. You should definitely try and put it to music!
cookiemonster said...
on Apr. 21 2011 at 4:24 pm
this is a really good espetialy for a first timer. its also deep i get were this is comeing from. if i were you then id keep writing and the more you do the better itl get.
distant_dreamer GOLD said...
on Apr. 15 2011 at 9:53 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
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Thanks for all the great comments, and yes you can use it for your track, I would be sooo honored! Could you maybe post it on youtube, so I could listen to it? :) Thanks so much again!
hello-im-a-koala said...
on Apr. 15 2011 at 1:30 pm
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This is really beautiful. I love it and I wish I could write good songs -_______- I'm so jealous...

 

 

 

 

 

Duane BRONZE said...
on Apr. 11 2011 at 12:52 pm
Duane BRONZE, Wathena, Kansas
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hey love the song just wondering if I can use it for my first song on my record?

love it

Maveric SILVER said...
on Apr. 8 2011 at 7:43 pm
Maveric SILVER, Baton Rouge, Louisiana
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wow this is great u realy need to have someone sing it or send it to recording co. if u get the chance read some on mine n tell me what u think once again that was great
candygirl1985 GOLD said...
on Apr. 1 2011 at 8:55 pm
candygirl1985 GOLD, Mechanicsburg, Pennsylvania
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Could you maybe set these lyrics to music? And maybe have someone sing it? I really like it, it is very good!
kaykaybeck PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 26 2011 at 8:52 pm
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Very good (: you should keep writing!