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In Love Simplicity

June 28, 2011
By LyricalBeauty GOLD, Fontana, California
LyricalBeauty GOLD, Fontana, California
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Favorite Quote:
" 'I am happy' that's just the saddest lie..."

"I think that all the silence is worse than all the violence. Fear is such a weak emotion, that's why I despise it..."


It doesn’t have to be so confusing and complex,
I simply don’t want to be just one before your next.
I want to be the only one that your heart can see.
That’s it, simple and flat.
I want you to want me,
It’s as simple as that.


The author's comments:
If only love could be as simple...

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LovelyLover. said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 3:27 pm
Ahhh, if only, if only. Great poem<3

veghead said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 10:52 am
so the title totally caught my eye, and im really glad i read it! its so awesome. if only love was that simple, right? you seem like a really good poet

Mrs.Green said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 10:30 am
Mrs.Green, Rialto, California
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Favorite Quote:
"When the power of love conquers the love of power, the world will be at peace."

Awwww !! Omg, i wish i could show this to the boy tht i like. I really wish it was as simple as saying "i like you. i wnt you to wnt me nd only me." =/ If only love could be so... simple !

on Jul. 21 2011 at 10:05 am
Jonah Awesome, Fontana, California
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Ahhhhh, if only it was as simple as a Cheap Trick song ;D (love that song btw hahah) The poem was short, sweet, and really good. Extremely relatable. Everyone wishes love was as simple as telling someone how you feel and having them understand what you mean.

Anagam BRONZE said...
on Jul. 19 2011 at 6:40 pm
Anagam BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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ur very welcome :)) if later on u want me to check ur work out just tell me

Anagam BRONZE said...
on Jul. 19 2011 at 6:32 pm
Anagam BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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@lyrical beauty

you are very welcome :)! i know the feeling :D


on Jul. 19 2011 at 1:19 pm
Mz.Minny2011 SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
My fav quote (4now)
When I met you my heart skipped a beat..... the sun became the moon & cold became heat.... Roses weren't red an violetes weren't blue.....And all because i fell IN LIKE WITH YOU <3

oh and i also forgot to ask to please read some of my other poems and tell me what u think tnx.!

 


on Jul. 19 2011 at 1:14 pm
Mz.Minny2011 SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
My fav quote (4now)
When I met you my heart skipped a beat..... the sun became the moon & cold became heat.... Roses weren't red an violetes weren't blue.....And all because i fell IN LIKE WITH YOU <3

wow i loved this. and i feel exactly the same way. love is so unecessarily complicated 

on Jul. 19 2011 at 10:24 am
LyricalBeauty GOLD, Fontana, California
14 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
" 'I am happy' that's just the saddest lie..."

"I think that all the silence is worse than all the violence. Fear is such a weak emotion, that's why I despise it..."

Thank you so much for reading and commenting on all of my poems! It means so much :D

Anagam BRONZE said...
on Jul. 17 2011 at 9:34 am
Anagam BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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I ask myself that all the time! Why can't love be simple? I love this poem :D