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Fat Dog

July 5, 2011
By JustEmily PLATINUM, Cicero, Indiana
JustEmily PLATINUM, Cicero, Indiana
22 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
That's HAWT!

There once was a cute little dog
But he tended to eat like a hog
And then just like that
He became very fat
And he needed to go on a jog

The author's comments:
Little chubby dogs are adorable

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This article has 3 comments.

firenrain GOLD said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 4:17 pm
firenrain GOLD, Belle Mead, New Jersey
10 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A room without books is like a body without a soul."

- Cicero

Roman author, orator, & politician (106 BC - 43 BC)

a very cute poem :) but maybe you want to add to it more? add in some sensory details to make it stand out? I dont know just a thought....lol

on Jul. 14 2011 at 12:03 pm
RFrocker23 PLATINUM, Ballwin, Missouri
22 articles 1 photo 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened."

Aww so cute. It made me laugh. Keep it up.

Mystiecub said...
on Jul. 11 2011 at 6:23 pm
this is a cute little poem, reminds me of one i wrote when i was a little kid xD good job