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Haiku
December 30, 2016
Haikus are so fun
But some of the time you can't
Finish what you're say-
© Jessica S. Pheonix, A
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This article has 4 comments.
devils_advocate said...
on May. 6 2017 at 9:18 am
@SpeakerofWolves and also the cutoff was intended, just as a funny joke about the struggles of writing haikus. It was actually my first haiku, so I am honored to have somebody comment on it!
devils_advocate said...
on May. 6 2017 at 9:12 am
Thank you so much! I really appreciate your feedback. Sounds like you're a good writer! I will make the changes. Again, thanks SO much! I've always wanted someone to give me feedback on my poems!
WolfWhisperer0911 BRONZE said...
on May. 5 2017 at 8:59 pm
@devils_advocate Wow, that's awesome! I noticed that you have the spaces which can easily be solved by typing into a document in the computer, copy, and paste in the text box. Just a little tip from me! ;) But on the other hand, I would maybe say on the second verse, "but sometimes you can't finish" and then go on the third verse like this," what is on the page".
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