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Whispers MAG

November 4, 2016
By LostPoetry GOLD, West Jordan, Utah
LostPoetry GOLD, West Jordan, Utah
10 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Each day I have to make a new promise to myself<br /> to be braver than my past<br /> to be stronger than the struggle<br /> So that I may find a bigger adventure regardless of the risks&quot;<br /> -Chrissie Pinney


Voices always said,
Try to think before you eat
Stomach’s now hollow



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on May. 14 2018 at 1:24 pm
sierradockery29 BRONZE, St.louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
&uml;never fall too hard for someone cause you never know what they are capable of&uml;

I absolutely love this because it has such a deep meaning to it and it just speaks to me good job and keep writing

on Dec. 22 2016 at 3:48 am
LeisurelySketches GOLD, Tricity, Other
10 articles 1 photo 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your life has a limit but knowledge has none. (Zhuangzi)

Wow. I completely agree with the previous comments, your haikus are deep.

KRose SILVER said...
on Nov. 11 2016 at 11:48 am
KRose SILVER, Portsmouth, Rhode Island
9 articles 3 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Maybe the journey isn&#039;t so much about becoming anything. Maybe it&#039;s about unbecoming everything that isn&#039;t really you, so you can be who you were meant to be in the first place.&quot;

This is such a powerful haiku. Wow. It really portrays a message, nice job!

on Nov. 11 2016 at 3:08 am
dissolving_into_words BRONZE, Amsterdam, New York
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment
I love this!

on Nov. 8 2016 at 9:28 pm
LostPoetry GOLD, West Jordan, Utah
10 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Each day I have to make a new promise to myself<br /> to be braver than my past<br /> to be stronger than the struggle<br /> So that I may find a bigger adventure regardless of the risks&quot;<br /> -Chrissie Pinney

Thank you, I'm really glad you liked it and got something from it.

whitemen said...
on Nov. 8 2016 at 9:03 pm
whitemen, Lafayette, Indiana
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;okay&quot;

It took me a little while to realize what you were saying, but once I understood the power behind that first line, I had a sort of BAM moment that made my heart contract. Dude, I didn't know haikus could be so powerful.