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Loving You MAG

October 17, 2016
By adam.paris14 BRONZE, St. Peters, Missouri
adam.paris14 BRONZE, St. Peters, Missouri
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Why Are We Like This

Staying Up All Night Fighting

Loving You, Kills Me


The author's comments:

Written as a poem about many relationships today, it is actually a Spoken Word Haiku meant for two people. The first line is the first person, second line is the second person, and the third is said together.


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on Apr. 30 2017 at 12:33 am
CynthiaFeathers ELITE, Frisco, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
He who is bound to a star does not turn back.<br /> Leonardo Di Vinci<br /> <br /> You see I&#039;m a bit of a poet, and you did not know it! What!?<br /> ~Sir Percy Blakeney

This poem is beautiful. I love the capitalization of each word, it emphasizes their importance and portrayed to me a sense of indignance and strength. It's a genius idea to turn a haiku into dialogue.