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Voyage

March 23, 2014
By Nobuo GOLD, Dio, Missouri
Nobuo GOLD, Dio, Missouri
16 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hello


The encroaching sails




Take me along with the wind
Let’s go together



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on Apr. 19 2014 at 12:59 am
jacey_poo BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
3 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
never judge a book by its cover

Your haiku speaks very well, nd it's really beautiful how u put this together, your a very talented person, never stop writing

on Apr. 11 2014 at 11:25 am
JacobTheOrdinary PLATINUM, Rancho Cucamonga, California
43 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fiction is the lie that tells the truth."

This is a nice haiku. Haiku's originated with talking about nature and you continue that tradition here. Weel written and good job.

on Apr. 4 2014 at 8:05 pm
WinterRose76 SILVER, Ok., Florida
6 articles 6 photos 183 comments

Favorite Quote:
Arise and be all that you dream - Flyleaf

Your haiku has this dream-inducing quality to it which I thought was awesome! Nice job!