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Bacon

October 25, 2013
By Anonymous

Bacon is perfect
Breathtakingly amazing
Stunning at its best


The author's comments:
I like bacon.

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grendel BRONZE said...
on Oct. 28 2013 at 12:34 pm
grendel BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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I can obviously see that you love bacon alot, who doesn't, but the way you use it in this haiku is very vague. I can replace the word bacon with almost any other word and have all the other words fall into place. Next time try to make the haiku more specific to your overall subject, if you will.