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Eye Witness

August 9, 2013
By GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
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In the three seconds
Before the goldfish forgot
He knew who killed me.



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on Aug. 17 2013 at 10:01 pm
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“I'd rather see a sermon than hear one any day; I'd rather one should walk with me than merely tell the way: The eye's a better pupil and more willing than the ear, fine counsel is confusing, but example's always clear.” -Edgar Guest

I cant help but wonder a bit.... is the speaker bitter, because a "friend" has already push aside and forgotton his/her troubles...? Or is it literally about a goldfish...? Or both...? Im sorry, but either way, you still made it funny as heck!

GreyGirl ELITE said...
on Aug. 16 2013 at 7:00 pm
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
170 articles 122 photos 391 comments
Thank you very much.

on Aug. 16 2013 at 3:31 pm
PeanutButterJelly SILVER, Hanahan, South Carolina
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This poem is stark. I enjoyed the tie between a short memory and a goldfish seeing as a goldfish's memory is only three seconds long. Great work!