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Loving You

July 11, 2013
By Anonymous

Pondering about love
Is it true or illusion
Your beauty allures

But it cannot be
As our love is fictitious
Like a fairy tale

© Anonymous

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sophistryxo SILVER said...
on Jul. 31 2013 at 11:32 am
sophistryxo SILVER, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
“There was nowhere to go but everywhere, so just keep on rolling under the stars.”
-Jack Kerouac

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This is my favorite poem of yours! It's a relatable topic and I especially like the second stanza!
Mckay ELITE said...
on Jul. 29 2013 at 6:05 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
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I think many of us have this doubt. Whether or not love is real. Or too fairy tale-ish. Very relateable. It's makes you think. Very well done. Love that title too.