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The Perfect Shape

June 27, 2013
By Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou


I love when your lips
form into that perfect shape:
the “I love you” shape.



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Mckay ELITE said...
on Jul. 16 2013 at 5:31 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

Took me a while to envision it too. Thanks. I appreciate the feedback.

HazelGrace said...
on Jul. 16 2013 at 4:22 pm
Hmmm. The more I read it the more I appreciated and loved its unqiue image. Way to accomplish a lot with 17 syallables. You don't really ever see someone envisioning the lip shape of "I love you" but the originality is what makes this good. Nice work :)

Mckay ELITE said...
on Jul. 16 2013 at 3:02 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

^u^ Thanks. Took me a while to come up with that. 

on Jul. 12 2013 at 6:26 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If it weren&rsquo;t for the coffee, I&rsquo;d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.&rdquo; &ndash;David Letterman

Cute :D I love the "I love you" shape ^_^ Ingenious haiku! I hereby tip off my checkered fedora to you.