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February 10, 2013
By ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.”
- Martin Luther King Jr.


Skin's goosebumps rise like
faulted mountain tops leaving
a rugged surface.



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on Oct. 31 2013 at 4:32 pm
411Ellie PLATINUM, Fridley, Minnesota
41 articles 28 photos 235 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Paper is more patient than people." –Anne Frank

Thank you so much!

on Oct. 31 2013 at 3:40 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.”
- Martin Luther King Jr.

Wow, I am speechless......I never thought that I would be somebody's hero. Thank you for the comment, am I am ecstatic that you like my work as I like yours. Oh, one more thing: Your new Haiku, Overcoming Writer's Block, is superb!

on Oct. 31 2013 at 12:58 am
411Ellie PLATINUM, Fridley, Minnesota
41 articles 28 photos 235 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Paper is more patient than people." –Anne Frank

Hi Chris :) You are my hero and inspiration. Please don't ever stop writing!! ~Fan

on Oct. 21 2013 at 9:03 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.”
- Martin Luther King Jr.

Thank you, my friend, for the support you give me. It really helps with things.

Mckay ELITE said...
on Oct. 21 2013 at 6:34 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

Congrats, my friend, on being a published writer once again. 

Mckay ELITE said...
on Aug. 1 2013 at 5:11 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

Yes, yes, it did. Sometimes the best poems are the ones we doubt the most. I sure know that. 

on Jul. 31 2013 at 2:40 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.”
- Martin Luther King Jr.

I'm astonished that you think my haiku is perfect, thank you so so much for the comment. I was actually very skeptical and doubtful of this when submitting it, I guess it all worked for the best, huh?

Mckay ELITE said...
on Jul. 30 2013 at 3:43 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

Critiques for this? Umm...no...It's perfect. Great imagery as always. 

on Feb. 18 2013 at 9:52 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.”
- Martin Luther King Jr.

Please rate on and leave advice for my piece! It would mean alot to me!