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Good Feelin' Feet

July 12, 2012
By surrealnow GOLD, Omaha, Nebraska
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brand new socks
cotton knitted perfectly
I'm walking on pillows

© Michelle D., So. Weymouth, MA

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surrealnow GOLD said...
on Jul. 19 2012 at 2:02 pm
surrealnow GOLD, Omaha, Nebraska
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that is for the most traditional haiku. contemporary haiku doesn't have to follow that syllabic order. it just has to be three lines and NO MORE than 17 syllables.
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on Jul. 18 2012 at 10:25 am
Wearing_Westwood GOLD, Cary, North Carolina
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five syllables first

then there are seven of them

five, seven, then five