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No Sense (:

March 29, 2012
By sstarr102732 BRONZE, Hemet, California
sstarr102732 BRONZE, Hemet, California
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Haiku's are real cool
but sometimes don't quite make sense
Air conditioner.

See? Got you counting
All the syllables in here!
five seven then five(:

Yeah, I'll keep going
on and on for days on end
And you'll keep counting

Five seven five again



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on Apr. 11 2012 at 8:32 pm
sstarr102732 BRONZE, Hemet, California
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Ahaha(: Thanks! ^.^ I'm Glad You Liked it! Just My Crazy Train Of Thought! Thanks For The Rating!

 


on Apr. 1 2012 at 2:19 pm
DaisyAngel BRONZE, Sandy Springs, Georgia
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Oh my gosh, this is amazing! Whenever I think something is really good, I start to tear up. I know, I'm weird. Honestly, this is the best poem I've read in a while, simply because it didn't make me feel depressed. What is wrong with teens nowadays? More people should be writing stuff like this, not death. Five stars and added to my favorites! This made my day 1,000,000 times better!