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Exhale
October 22, 2010
A world bleak and worn
Sighs heavily before sleep
The wind in autumn
© Scott B., Chester, CT
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This article has 8 comments.
whatev said...
on Jul. 28 2011 at 10:35 am
this piece very much provokes profound thoughts! Loved it! :D
whatev said...
on Jul. 28 2011 at 10:32 am
what i got from this poem is that each season brings on different stances for the earth, the most obvious to me was that winter was the time for sleeping. So when the earth was preparing itself for slumber it sighed and created the autumn wind
Alex_Durham GOLD said...
on Jun. 8 2011 at 9:19 am
I LOVED the first two lines. I'm actually imagining the earth exhaling and it's beautiful. Very creative! :)
TheGraeWolf GOLD said...
on Nov. 15 2010 at 12:25 pm
I think the first two lines are great, but the third leaves me hanging. You should add to this; three more lines like the first couple would make this wonderful.
Healing_Angel SILVER said...
on Nov. 10 2010 at 6:56 pm
This is good. Short and sweet. Good job. You should continue this! The last line seems odd and doesn't really fit.
