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My Home MAG

April 15, 2010
By Anonymous

My home is broken
raging violence of whispers
a sad silent voice

the blank mind of love
a thick fog of confusion
thoughts of a memory

Why is it that we
suffer the quiet courage
of not speaking out

a desperate scream
looking for a face of hope
hugs become a wish


The author's comments:
i felt confused and sad at the moment i sat at home. but no one's family is perfect so i don't expect mine to be

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aphids77 said...
on Jan. 5 2012 at 6:01 pm
aphids77, Holly Springs, North Carolina
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no doubt best haiku i've ever read.

on Oct. 8 2010 at 5:08 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

This is, I'm not sure what it is. Do I really want to label it? Maybe I should just leave  it at this; it was beautiful, in my eyes, lovely and compelling imagery.

Thanks for posting, and, congratulations on getting it published :)


on Oct. 7 2010 at 7:30 pm
communicativedistractions PLATINUM, Fall City, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I miss you like an alcoholic misses toothpaste.&quot;

awesome job! I love it!