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Liezz

December 17, 2009
By sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."


Everything twisted;
You're entangled in them all;
Masking the real truth

Is there a way out?
Attempt to uncover them;
Lost in abstractions

A miniscule thing
Turning into so much more;
Your life inside-out

Jumble up your mind;
Pounding harshly on your soul;
You scowl discreetly

Haunt us in our dreams;
Waking up to muffled screams;
Engulfed in nightmares

No one knows but you;
Carrying such a burden;
If only they knew


The author's comments:
People say 'oh, it's just a little white lie.'
Some can turn into huge, ugly, monstrous things that haunt your mind.
This is about those who have figured out a feeling even worse than death itself.

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on Jan. 16 2010 at 1:50 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

thanxx 4 the feedback & glad ya liked it ;D

on Jan. 12 2010 at 10:41 pm
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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Wow, i really really really love your descriptions! especially the last two haikus because of the rhymes that seemed to make it all the stronger. awesome, keep writing!