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Rainbow Wings

November 6, 2009
By shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

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Laughing until your stomach hurts :)<br /> That&#039;s what friends are for &lt;3


Gracefully dancing
Fluttering in the blue skies
Rainbows in its wings

In search of a leaf
To perch on ‘till morning light
The Butterfly sleeps


The author's comments:
When playing with my neighbors, I saw a beautiful butterfly flying around in the sky. It inspired me to write this Haiku. I hope you guys enjoy it.

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on Jan. 21 2010 at 6:45 pm
ilovetinkerbell GOLD, Raytown, Missouri
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Be yourself!!!

okay. by the way yours are great.

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Jan. 21 2010 at 6:05 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)<br /> That&#039;s what friends are for &lt;3

okay i will look at them right now :)

on Jan. 21 2010 at 12:52 pm
ilovetinkerbell GOLD, Raytown, Missouri
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Be yourself!!!

Okay they just posted some new ones that I wrote. I had promised to tell you when they came out. :)

Tinkerbell

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Jan. 3 2010 at 7:38 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)<br /> That&#039;s what friends are for &lt;3

Thanks sooo much!!!!!! Butterflys are sooo pretty!!!! :)

angier GOLD said...
on Dec. 29 2009 at 10:23 am
angier GOLD, Centerville ,Pa, Pennsylvania
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&quot;All you need is love. But a little chocolate now and then doesn&#039;t hurt. &quot;

I think this poem is short and sweet !! Wonderful !!

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Dec. 17 2009 at 5:51 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)<br /> That&#039;s what friends are for &lt;3

ya i thought it neede more detail top :) its really hard in a haiku but i will continue writing with improvement. thanx soo much 4 the comment ;)

on Dec. 17 2009 at 9:58 am
ilovetinkerbell GOLD, Raytown, Missouri
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Be yourself!!!

Great job. um, i think it needed a little more detail but other than that it was great.

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