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Seven little men

September 19, 2009
By Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
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Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
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&quot;words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them&quot; <br /> -Me (random thought)

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Seven little men
Four went inside of the pen
none came back again

(ok teen ink said I had to enter an article at least a hundred characters long so i'm typing this to make it longer)

The author's comments:
I know it sounds wierd but it is what popped into my head and I wrote it. So here it is.
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dakotawright SILVER said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 11:09 am
dakotawright SILVER, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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&quot;Knowledge speaks but wisdom listens.&quot; - Jimi Hendrix

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Great Imagery! I saw the seven dwarfs when I read this for some reason.

 

jmurph said...
on Apr. 6 2011 at 12:21 pm
jmurph, Saugus, Massachusetts
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Didnt really understand it, but nice job and thanks for making me laugh :)
Thibodeau BRONZE said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 12:38 pm
Thibodeau BRONZE, Whitby, Other
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This was nice, it made me laugh haha

in a serious way though, i appreciate it
Brittaner DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 10 2009 at 8:13 am
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them&quot; <br /> -Me (random thought)

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I got into a Haiku kick and it popped into my head
ethanest said...
on Oct. 7 2009 at 7:50 am
ethanest, Marion, Massachusetts
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THat was GENOUS! You should be a poetic, or whatever they are called. The ending really reflected you as an author, the part in the parenthesis. Once again, BRILLANT!