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Useless Attempt

August 23, 2022
By LiteraryMe PLATINUM, Dayton, Ohio
LiteraryMe PLATINUM, Dayton, Ohio
41 articles 19 photos 519 comments

Favorite Quote:
“The earth has music for those who listen.” —William Shakespeare


Useless, empty brain

no words un-used or spoken

nothing left to write.


The author's comments:

When you try to write something, but everything seems to ordinary or over used that the endeavor is banished until inspiration strikes.


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malo BRONZE said...
on Jan. 20 2023 at 2:00 pm
malo BRONZE, Chandler, Arizona
1 article 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"it's me. hi! i'm the problem,it's me"
-taylor swift-

yo fam, u r evrywhr. i lookd into the pieces of others and omg, u wr thr in the comments of most. so i read ur pieces. mny of thm r worth commenting bt 4 nw i will leave a comment on jst this.

fam, ths is facts 2 the max. ultra relatable. i am so related 2 ths. personally i love haikus bcz they r short yt clear. i wanna see more haikus frm u, fam. <3

on Aug. 30 2022 at 11:27 am
LiteraryMe PLATINUM, Dayton, Ohio
41 articles 19 photos 519 comments

Favorite Quote:
“The earth has music for those who listen.” —William Shakespeare

Thank you @Disneygirl_1! I like to write Haiku for that reason :)

on Aug. 30 2022 at 7:21 am
Extrasweet DIAMOND, Tenafly, New Jersey
94 articles 24 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"On ne voit bien qu'avec le coeur" - Antoine de Saint-Exupery
"Laughter is timeless, imagination has no age, dreams are forever" - Walt Disney

Wow...this is fantastic, @LiteraryMe It's a short haiku and yet it conveys such a clear message to the readers! Great job! This is wonderful :)

on Aug. 25 2022 at 8:09 am
LiteraryMe PLATINUM, Dayton, Ohio
41 articles 19 photos 519 comments

Favorite Quote:
“The earth has music for those who listen.” —William Shakespeare

Thank you! You have a way with words as well

ElaM ELITE said...
on Aug. 24 2022 at 10:07 pm
ElaM ELITE, Surrey, Columbia
309 articles 24 photos 117 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I was ashamed of myself when I realized life was a costume party; and I attended with my real face.” ~Franz Kafka

I’ve never thought about where one’s mind can idle away into useless thoughts. It feels good to rather say it out loud and to let it chide away bleeding like ink on a wet paper: blending into one. Great haiku you got there @LiteraryMe !