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Chocolate

January 13, 2022
By The-Grim-Reaper SILVER, Hudson, New Hampshire
The-Grim-Reaper SILVER, Hudson, New Hampshire
8 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
We are all born crazy some of us remain that way

We don't talk about Bruno

Silenco Bruno


Lovely cultivate
A delicous, sparkle chocolate flys
betrayed by the space 


The author's comments:

"The juxtaposition of chocolate and space is truly inspired."
- The Daily Tale
"I don't like short poems. So why am I reviewing a haiku, you may wonder? Well, I liked the title - 'Chocolate'. It went down hill from there."
- Enid Kibbler
"Amazing how so few words can set a scene so perfectly. I close my eyes and all I can see is the lovely cultivate."
- Hit the Spoof
"I felt that I was a chocolate. It was spooky. I hope to read more by Grim. Perhaps next time, something longer."
- Zob Gloop
"I've always wanted to write a haiku about a chocolate. I can't belive Grim has beaten me to it."
- Betty Borison
"Lovely cultivate is a popular first line for a haiku. It's incredible how much diversity can be achieved with those final lines."
- Chris Critic, otherwise known as Cristic

(Just for the laughs these aren't real XD) 


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Afra ELITE said...
on May. 10 2022 at 12:48 pm
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
102 articles 7 photos 1819 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."
-Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

Honestly, I love this haiku, especially because of the tuning of chocolate and space, haha!!!😃😃😃
BTW, I like your comment part, and it did make me laugh especially the Cristic part!!! :p