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Remember to Forget me
June 2, 2009
Roses lined the paths
Everyone else took, but we
Met by quiet lakes
Evenings spent giggling –
My laughs echoed on your skin
Bare in summer heat
“Ends come to all things.”
Reminding me of that, you
Took my hand and begged
Of me, “Remember,
Far into the bleak future,
Our time of being.”
Request accepted.
Great, but I would not of you
Ever ask the same
Today, I think on
My fate alone, a ghost to
Everyone and you
© Rebecca Y., Los Angeles, CA
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SassyJones GOLD said...
on Apr. 29 2010 at 10:12 pm
God love it. What are the rules of a haiku? what do you think of my free verse- on my mind?
BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 16 2010 at 10:55 am
I was hooked on the first verse! Very awesome! Mind commenting some of my work? Thx!
-Rose
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micky 919 said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 2:54 pm
very well thought of, very sad but a good sad
munkyman95 GOLD said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 12:56 pm
Really good, loved the first verse
jennee21_ann GOLD said...
on Sep. 5 2009 at 4:18 pm
very nice style of incorporating the hiaku part! :) as for the content, it is truly wonderful! bravo :) check out some of my work if you will too :)
. said...
on Sep. 2 2009 at 12:24 pm
Very nice. This is definitely the first the Acrostic Haiku I have seen here. That is wonderfully written as well! Great job.
Please read my work, and leave a comment or rate.
Kudos.
Please read my work, and leave a comment or rate.
Kudos.
