STANZA 1: This is a good start to the poem. It introduces the conflict well. My favorite lines are "I refuse to believe what you did to me/ Has been written in my life in permanent ink", though I would suggest cutting out "in my life" because it would eliminate the repetition of "in", and since you're using the page as a metaphor for a time in your life, it isn’t necessary to say "in my life". Also, the words "see" and "me" rhyme while none of the rest of the stanza does so, which is distracting. I would recommend changing "The page is hot and worn but I still see" to something like "The page is hot and worn but the marks can still be seen", or whatever you want that doesn't rhyme with "me". STANZA 2: Replace "but the picture is still there" with "the picture remains" to avoid repetition of "still". Add a comma between "sweet" and "sad". Change "the darn words" to "those darn words" so it is parallel with the rest of the sentence. To avoid random rhyme, change up either the second-to-last line or the last line so “page” isn’t rhyming with “rage”. Nice use of exclamation with "Torn off! Yanked off!" STANZA 3: I like the use of synonyms in the fourth line of this stanza. Replace "Chapters are" with "Chapters have". I would switch around “shame” and “pain” in the last line; I don’t really have a reason for that, it just sounds better to me. LAST LINES: I would eliminate the lines “I’m erasing” and “But it won’t go away”. The third-to-last line, “I’m still erasing” makes it clear that the marks have not gone away. Ending your poem on the line that you have been repeating at the beginning of every stanza gives it more punch than introducing a new configuration of words at the end. Thank you for the opportunity to review your work. If you have any questions about my feedback, feel free to let me know.