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Firefly (did you hear it?) MAG

March 11, 2009
By Hanna Crooks GOLD, Louisville, Kentucky
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Did you hear it
Whisper
See it
Flicker
Feel it
Flutter
The idea
Inspiration
Firefly in your heart
Gone
In an instant
No time to capture.

© Chyla P., El Dorado, KS

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hadiya.r14 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 17 2010 at 9:22 am
hadiya.r14 BRONZE, Pleasant Grove, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life is all memory, except for the one present moment that goes by you so quickly you hardly catch it going.&quot;

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I like it's soo pretty!
fallingdusk BRONZE said...
on Aug. 26 2010 at 7:44 am
fallingdusk BRONZE, Manlius, New York
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Favorite Quote:
With each person that dies, a library is burned.

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Quick, to the point, perfect!
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 18 2010 at 8:20 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

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amazing(; deffinitly tagged as a favorite
splinterstar BRONZE said...
on Jun. 18 2010 at 11:50 am
splinterstar BRONZE, Arcadia, California
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Oh my gosh, you described the exact feelings and experience I have whenever I have an idea at this blinking moment and then it escapes me! Frustrating, isn't it?
ThermadorianGrey SILVER said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 7:35 pm
ThermadorianGrey SILVER, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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I love pieces like this that use little linguistic flourishes without resorting to distorting the meaning of the piece to do so.  I'm quite impressed by your ability to include things like rough rhyme, rhythm, euphony, consonance, et cetera without stretching for words that fit.  It feels like it came very natural, and that's good.
Blooper195 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 12:03 pm
Blooper195 PLATINUM, McKinney, Texas
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This life ain&#039;t that bad.

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Love this poem. speaks to people in many different ways.
Electricity PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 13 2009 at 1:25 pm
Electricity PLATINUM, Bradenton, Florida
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I agree with Anonymous... very nice, love it.
MorningStar15 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 26 2009 at 2:20 am
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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very lovely
SaraB. GOLD said...
on Jul. 8 2009 at 2:25 pm
SaraB. GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
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&quot;Whatever you are, be a good one&quot; Abraham Lincoln

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Wow. I could never write something so powerful with only 27 words.
Anonymous said...
on Jul. 6 2009 at 9:57 pm
Simple, clean, and straightfoward. Oustanding writing using simplicity