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On Love MAG

January 2, 2009
By neshkuh GOLD, Lower Mainland, Other
neshkuh GOLD, Lower Mainland, Other
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Those lucky enough to find it
Will throw it away.
Those who cannot see it
Will scorn it.
And all the while
Someone out there
Will be wishing
For a chance at both.



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on Nov. 29 2009 at 4:24 pm
misbubbles93 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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I like this, very relateable

HélèneC said...
on Nov. 19 2009 at 12:15 am
LOL obviously the title is what the poeme is about... "On Love", the poeme is 'on love' hahah.

TigerLynn GOLD said...
on Nov. 7 2009 at 2:00 pm
TigerLynn GOLD, Maysville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;She walks in beauty,<br /> Like the night of cloudless climes and starry skies;<br /> And all that&#039;s best of dark and bright<br /> Meet in her aspect and her eyes.&quot;<br /> --Byron

great

its worded well

on Jul. 1 2009 at 9:34 pm
Elsie Dominguez BRONZE, Heber, California
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soo true :)

Lonleydandy said...
on Jun. 27 2009 at 2:40 am
O my gosh...I love this. I can SO relate. I don't have it, and I want it, but someone I knew had it from who I wanted it from, and they just THREW IT AWAY. I know why, but it was unfair......she knows it was to, and doesn't feel bad about it. I LOVED IT

on Jun. 15 2009 at 2:05 am
hunter cregger BRONZE, Roanoke, Virginia
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sad for me

on Jun. 11 2009 at 2:26 am
hopekristinex SILVER, Canton, Ohio
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so simple but captivating. i love poems like this.

on Jun. 8 2009 at 7:42 pm
delizabethl PLATINUM, Linesville, Pennsylvania
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It's great work, and I really like it. But I prefer longer poems. Plus, I can't see what the title has to do with the poem. No offense intended.

on Jun. 6 2009 at 2:25 am
SillySarah BRONZE, Covert, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Live today as if there is no tomorrow.

I love this. It is so cute.

on Jun. 2 2009 at 7:59 pm
Polly_4_Ever GOLD, Hubbard, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;m Not Afraid of The Dark, I&#039;m Afraid Of What&#039;s In It. I&#039;m Not Afraid of Heights, I&#039;m Afraid of Falling. I&#039;m Not Afraid Of Love, I&#039;m Afraid Of Not Being Loved Back..&quot;

Okayy Woah. I've Heard this Before.. Like.. SOmewhere Else... I Don't Know Where.. But I Feel Like I've Heard It Somewhere Else...

on May. 29 2009 at 7:39 pm
HeavenCooley GOLD, Stillwater, Oklahoma
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this is so totally true!!

and you no sometimes im like that as well.

bubbles said...
on May. 22 2009 at 2:18 pm
i loved it it was great and it is soo true some people dont relize what they have till it is gone keep wrighting

on May. 16 2009 at 2:42 am
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life&#039;s a mountain on a beach&quot;-Unknown<br /> &quot;Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It&#039;s remarkable how often those two traits coincide.&quot;-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

It's good and i like it but... you should find a way to work the title into the poem or work the title FROM the poem. Lots of people i know don't bother with the title. The feelings and descriptions are supposed to be IN the poems while the title is a way of complimenting it- making people want to read it.

on May. 15 2009 at 12:26 pm
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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it was pretty sweet i liked it. ;)

JustMe!! said...
on May. 10 2009 at 11:44 pm
I like this its simple yet nice. Good Job!! :]

on Apr. 26 2009 at 11:28 am
Kumanga DIAMOND, Bethel, Alaska
56 articles 0 photos 95 comments

Favorite Quote:
Always Accept nd love urself for who u are!

its pretty good......