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you are up much too late

October 7, 2014
By SpidersAcrossStars PLATINUM, Hayward, California
SpidersAcrossStars PLATINUM, Hayward, California
36 articles 0 photos 160 comments

Favorite Quote:
For you, a thousand times over.


little girl

 

let the sugar

of falseness

of untruth

of silicone

 

consume 

your bitter tongue

in waves of

sickeningly

sweet

swallows

 

now

take another sip

 

drown.



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on May. 16 2015 at 12:06 am
SpidersAcrossStars PLATINUM, Hayward, California
36 articles 0 photos 160 comments

Favorite Quote:
For you, a thousand times over.

:) this comment made me so happy. thank you

on Mar. 23 2015 at 10:38 pm
Shards_of_my_soul GOLD, BHUBANESWAR, Other
17 articles 15 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
if you can't handle me at my worst,
then you certainly don't deserve at my best!

it is the events that shape our lives,
but it is the choices we make that define us...

life is not about finding yourself,
life is about creating yourself

WOW...THIS WORK IS....SIMPLY EPIC. considering today's society, i think this is what girls are actually taught....i know we ought to write all inspirational things, but sometimes it's so important to first expose the truth.... i think you have captured the feelings bang on... do keep writing, i see talent in you.