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July 15, 2014
By Winterangyl BRONZE, Pinckney, Michigan
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Face flush
as I bite my cheek forcefully
Fury spreads through my body like a wild-fire,
burning my limbs from head to toe
My body becomes tense
as I stand there with my fists clenched
my breath deepens,
and my conscious becomes a blur
A blur into a black hole within my universe of a mind
nothing can stop me.
My once tamed body,
now controlled by the demons from within me.

© Hali S., Robinson, IL

The author's comments:
I was inspired to write this after watching a close friend become more angry than I have ever witnessed anyone to be before. It was so intriguing.
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