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Just Another Poem...

March 17, 2014
By xxMedievalShadexx GOLD, Deerfield Beach, Florida
xxMedievalShadexx GOLD, Deerfield Beach, Florida
17 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is like a friendship caught on fire. In the beginning a flame, very pretty, often hot and fierce, but still only light and flickering. As love grows older, our hearts mature and our love becomes as coals, deep-burning and unquenchable. -Bruce Lee

Spring is around the corner
Many people are rapturously in love.
Except me.
My love seems to fly away like a dove.

When people walk near me
You can hear the ominous music.
But be very careful
Catastrophe finds me amusing.

The deceased laugh at me
My harrowing thoughts keep people at bay.
I never tell my secrets
I need to live this way.

The revelation of my secrets
Would cause cataclysms everywhere.
People run from my eccentric self
They run, but then catch a breath of air.

Maybe one day instead of being voracious
I will drown my fears in wonder and sub zero.
Maybe then I can have someone
My protagonist, my hero.

The author's comments:
I wrote this for an activity for my class and it turned out better than expected.

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on Sep. 6 2014 at 1:57 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

This poem is simply fabulous!!! I so admire you for having such a rich vocabulary. It was so poetic and beautifully written. Your words were so deep that I can't seem to stop them from running in circles in my mind. I guess I have to admit that you really left an impact on me. You made me wanna learn more and discover new words. So thanks for the inspiration and keep it up cuz it's just wonderful ^_^

on Apr. 24 2014 at 10:46 am
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 437 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

Very well written! Love the elegance of the vocabulary and tone:)

Lucifer666 said...
on Mar. 25 2014 at 11:23 pm
Lucifer666, Hell, Other
0 articles 0 photos 63 comments
You did a superb job. Your words, are simply impeccable and I thought I have a high vocabulary level XD The rhythm flows smoothly throughout, and the whole poem is magnificent. "My protagonist, my hero" are words that continue to reverberate through my mind. Beautifully penned

on Mar. 25 2014 at 11:19 pm
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
1 article 0 photos 274 comments

Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

Holy freaken cow!! THIS IS AMAZING!! I wish I could write like this!! Aye it makes me want to expand on my vocabulary.. XD AMAZING LOGIC!! :D :3