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Don't Go

December 4, 2013
By KassandraThough GOLD, Bridgeport, Texas
KassandraThough GOLD, Bridgeport, Texas
13 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I will destroy you in the most beautiful way possible and when im finished, you will finally understand why storms are named after people."


I’m afraid to reply
When you text me
In the middle of the
Night, because you
Learned my secrets
I opened up
And I’m afraid
That you’ll ask
Me what happened.
Or why I am this way
And then you’ll
Leave. just like
Every body
Else.



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on Jan. 19 2014 at 11:28 am
Butterflies93 BRONZE, Strafford, New Hampshire
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I love the idea of this poem.  I think removing the 'Me' in line 9 could make that particular piece of the poem slightly more effective?  Also, maybe play with the punctuation a bit?  I like the beginning the way it is though (without the punctuaion) because I read it faster and it's really good that way.  8]  Nice!  

on Jan. 17 2014 at 4:51 pm
Myvoice4change SILVER, Other, Other
9 articles 3 photos 164 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything will be ok in the end. If it's not okay, it's not the end."

Wow, actually I've been feeling like this lately! Well written! You have a good rhythm scheme  and I like how the lines get smaller towards the end until there's only one word!