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Not what meets the mind

November 13, 2013
By EscapingfromReality GOLD, Syracuse, New York
EscapingfromReality GOLD, Syracuse, New York
12 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
I will follow when you prove you can lead.


You can't see us.


You can't hear us.


But if you open you're mind, you're heart...


You might just be able to feel us.


If you allow us into you're body.


You might just feel who we were.


We were mothers, brothers and children too.


Feel our message.


Feel our story.


Feel our wind like hands, steady on your shoulder.


Guiding you.


You pray to the Heavens or to a God for help...


If you clear you're head, you may feel our whispers.


Advising you what to do.


We stalk to streets at night, just as you.


If you give us a chance you may feel us there too.


I can not say were harmless, but we mean you no harm.


Open you're heart, you're mind, you're body and...


You just might...


Feel our voices, whispering, advising you.


Feel our hand, guiding you, leading you.


Loving you


The author's comments:
In poetry I was told to write about sprit, now they meant school sprit. However I don't like being told what to right about. ;)
Enjoy. :)

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on Nov. 25 2013 at 10:13 am
Dr.FeelGood GOLD, Allemen, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"is oxygen a gas?" brought to us by my friend the blonde.

shot? i thought we had a stick?

on Nov. 21 2013 at 7:38 pm
EscapingfromReality GOLD, Syracuse, New York
12 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
I will follow when you prove you can lead.

Im not sure but its worth a shot. Lol

on Nov. 21 2013 at 10:12 am
Dr.FeelGood GOLD, Allemen, Iowa
13 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
"is oxygen a gas?" brought to us by my friend the blonde.

whats a stick going to do?

on Nov. 20 2013 at 10:28 am
EscapingfromReality GOLD, Syracuse, New York
12 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
I will follow when you prove you can lead.

HAHAHAH!!! That was great. Quick get a stick!

on Nov. 19 2013 at 11:43 am
Dr.FeelGood GOLD, Allemen, Iowa
13 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
"is oxygen a gas?" brought to us by my friend the blonde.

nvm it was just a kid from school lol

on Nov. 18 2013 at 7:12 pm
EscapingfromReality GOLD, Syracuse, New York
12 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
I will follow when you prove you can lead.

Thats was EXACTLY was I was hoping. >:)

on Nov. 18 2013 at 10:22 am
Dr.FeelGood GOLD, Allemen, Iowa
13 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
"is oxygen a gas?" brought to us by my friend the blonde.

when i read this i feel like there is someone behind me