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Incompletely Me

October 24, 2013
By Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

I’m one hundred percent certain
That I’m zero percent

Because fifty percent belongs to you,
But the other half
Is gone

I think in Wonderland you never come out

And percentages become a part of your

Let’s talk about ninety, then eighty,
Now twenty-three

Will I ever be completely

Whatever I left back in that place,
I hope they’ve at least
Had fun with

Because I wish when I said
“I am yours”

I had all of me
To give.

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This article has 2 comments.

on Nov. 8 2013 at 9:28 am
RandomPoet SILVER, Apopka, Florida
9 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is like a box of chocolates you never know what your gonna get"Forrest Gump
"Never say goodbye, because goodbye means going away and going away means for getting"Peterpan

Sometimes I can be the same way. I like the way this was written and expressed! Good Job!

on Oct. 28 2013 at 10:17 am
TargonTheDragon GOLD, Ofallon, Missouri
15 articles 16 photos 292 comments

Favorite Quote:
First dentistry was painless.
Then bicycles were chainless,
Carriages were horseless,
And many laws enforceless.

Next cookery was fireless,
Telegraphy was wireless,
Cigars were nicotineless,
And coffee caffeineless.

Soon oranges were seedless,
The putting green was weedless,
The college boy was hatless,
The proper diet fatless.

New motor roads are dustless,
The latest steel is rustless,
Our tennis courts are sodless,
Our new religion — godless.

:(.... im feeling for you right now...