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Your Gloomy Day

September 30, 2013
By Madison_ BRONZE, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
Madison_ BRONZE, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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A Smile
usually means happiness
but today,
it was your mask
you tried to fool me,
but your eyes told me
you were hurt.
so lean on my shoulder
and cry
my arms are open
let me show you
what you mean to me
no matter
what others say
you are perfect,
beautiful.
If the devil tries
to bring you down
stand strait
and remember
I believe in you.



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on Oct. 30 2013 at 3:04 pm
Madison_ BRONZE, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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yeah... sorry about the typo. But thank you! Also, thanks for reading it. :)

on Oct. 30 2013 at 2:53 pm
CookieMonster24 PLATINUM, Delhi, Other
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Did you mean *straight in the third last line? ;)  But it was a great work, really. I don't really know what to say anymore, but yeah, just know that it gave me an empty feeling deep down. Empty in a good way. Good job.

on Oct. 30 2013 at 2:49 pm
KayliLovesYou PLATINUM, Lincoln, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
dont cry because it is over smile because it happened

i love this great work