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All the Right and Wrong Intentions

August 29, 2013
By Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

He swore upon every dazzling star that Hell
Could not keep them
While his fingers were crossed and she
Was double-crossed,
Togetherness a thing only imagined, for her,
And means to an end,
For him—
An end that left her used and trembling
In the coldness of what must have been
Hell frozen over
In the corners of a dark, dank, dreadful, devilish
Heart of the one she

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on Sep. 17 2013 at 7:40 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 444 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If it weren’t for the coffee, I’d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.” –David Letterman

I love the usage of "crossed" and "double-crossed;" it's just so witty of you. But then, you're always witty in your writing, and this was no exception. BRAVOOOO!

on Sep. 9 2013 at 6:19 pm
TargonTheDragon GOLD, Ofallon, Missouri
15 articles 16 photos 292 comments

Favorite Quote:
First dentistry was painless.
Then bicycles were chainless,
Carriages were horseless,
And many laws enforceless.

Next cookery was fireless,
Telegraphy was wireless,
Cigars were nicotineless,
And coffee caffeineless.

Soon oranges were seedless,
The putting green was weedless,
The college boy was hatless,
The proper diet fatless.

New motor roads are dustless,
The latest steel is rustless,
Our tennis courts are sodless,
Our new religion — godless.

too true. too heartsickeningly true.