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Phoenix

August 27, 2013
By rand0mteenager SILVER, Yonkers, New York
rand0mteenager SILVER, Yonkers, New York
8 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
I like books more than people


I look back on the past,
To the days of yesterday
Each memory slowly fading away
The darker ones fading more slowly
than the light

I try to cling to some
Trying to learn and relish,
In my mistakes and happiness
I see the days of before-
Wondering how things change so quickly

I look at myself; then and now
What has changed
What's stayed the same,
Who am I? And who do I thank for that?

I burn down the old
Memories going away to make room,
For the new
I am a Phoenix,
And I will be reborn in the
Ashes of my past


The author's comments:
I decided to do something that was kind of different, from what I usually write and this is it(:

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on Sep. 15 2013 at 10:12 pm
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
34 articles 2 photos 658 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't punish yourself," she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing."
--Markus Zusak, "The Book Thief"

Nice concept! I like how it slowly changes into accepting the fact that you can't change the past and you need to let go.

on Sep. 1 2013 at 7:22 pm
LaChouette GOLD, Mount Vernon, New York
12 articles 0 photos 146 comments

Favorite Quote:
“And then there are the times when the wolves are silent and the moon is howling.”
- George Carlin

Wow, this was really cool. I love the ending. It really ties the piece together. Very nice job!

on Aug. 31 2013 at 2:42 pm
bruisedmemories ELITE, Birdsboro, Pennsylvania
109 articles 10 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When you're young, you can fly, but we trip on clouds 'cause we get too high" -The Band Perry (Song: Don't Let Me Be Lonely)
"Cause no matter what, you'll never be alone" -Lady Antebellum (Song: Compass)

Omg this is amazing! I loved it too! Keep writing!!! 

on Aug. 30 2013 at 1:32 am
rand0mteenager SILVER, Yonkers, New York
8 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
I like books more than people

XDthanks a lot

x_rbdf GOLD said...
on Aug. 29 2013 at 5:28 pm
x_rbdf GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
17 articles 1 photo 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
He who faces give no light shall never become a star

Mad Bro , I loved It !!!! I mean The last part Though.... Brillant Like It was deep  . I mean like , The dynamics , the organaity , the imagery , The everything Completey Brillant 10000 Stars !!!!!!!!!!!!!