I have to do it, AHHH, and I'm sorry it's the first feedback you read from me but—both "their"-s should be "they're", lol. Okay, phew, got that off my chest. I really liked this poem, and you definitely have your own unique writing style that seems pretty consistent. The part that goes "would rather just be depressed" is my favorite because its so insightful, I guess. Like, people don't normally think of depression as a choice, but it totally is. Sometimes the numbing effect of depression can be addicting and hard to get away from. Love the meaning and the style, you're a great writer :)

This is a nice piece. There were a few grammar errors, but other than that, it was nice. Keep up the good work!