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swirling smoke

July 4, 2013
By Katherineloe SILVER, Watsonville, California
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Katherineloe SILVER, Watsonville, California
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Favorite Quote:
no ones afraid of the dark, we're afraid of whats hidden inside of it.

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Take a drag.
As you
inhale the sky
and exhale the universe,
remember me
on your sweet high.
Remember how you felt
lying next to me,
as we gazed at the stars,
that are our eyes.
Remember how my fingers
laced themselves with yours,
like my favorite sneakers.
Remember how hard we fell,
like a comet in the night sky.
please

just


remember



me,
as you take your last drag
on your sweet high.

© Olivia E., Alto, MI

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