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Loose Ends

June 26, 2013
By Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

We promised to meet a long time ago,
But you don't remember,
You wouldn't, would you?
With your insouciance and mindless
For my heart or my volatile
So I'll meet you someday
But you won't know me
We'll meet in a gateway by chance
A clandestine kind of Fate, one not observed
By any god
And not really destined for much more
Than tying up all the loose

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on Aug. 9 2013 at 6:56 pm
StarlitSunrise DIAMOND, Clemmons, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Blessed are they who see beautiful things in humble places where other people see nothing." ~Camille Pissarro

This poem seems so sad to me, but maybe that is not what you had in mind. And don’t get me wrong, I really do love it. There is something about the could-have-been, if-only kind of thinking that I find incredibly powerful.

on Jun. 29 2013 at 7:26 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 444 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If it weren’t for the coffee, I’d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.” –David Letterman

I like this wishful sort of poem. I don't know, the hidden hopefulness of it all pops out to me. Wonderful job! :D